Under the White – Finished
Feb, 2009 (2009-02-26 07:30)
I’ve completed Under the White, which is surely one of my best stories to date with the possible exception of Left at Last Shadows.
It’s not the plot development I want, or the ratcheting tension I’d like to convey, but it’s clearly better than my prior attempts. And it ends well! (I know, odd indeed for a Wulfish work)
Check out the excerpt (above); for those of you who enjoy such things, I’ve posted it for critique on the Circle.
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